Pyramid Head Vs Pyramid Head Vs The Butcher

[Pyramid Head]

Right well, this was a rough idea I had for a little short comic thing. The dialog needs refining, and these are just little doodles in order to distinguish them all from each other, but if I do it right, this could end up kinda cool.

Basically, it's showing Pyramid Head's dislike for The Butcher, and how he's "doing it wrong". And how he's a n00b. Trying to throw a comical thing into it, oh well. Thoughts on it?

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[Clyde Monteiro]

Its nice. The funny part with me is when the legs just said "Get it! Rape it!"